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Chains "Entity Unknown" by ~Djinni266:iconDjinni266:



U! Yes u
U, who owns  my heart and soul
U, who binds my essence
and calms my anger in a single glance
U, who binds me to this earth with your own existence
though i only wish escape

I LOVE U
You beautiful body, curved and lithe
as though landscaped by God
an angel blazing free

Ur beautiful eyes
So soft and bright
made dark by the velvet curtains of your hair
Ur essence pure and free
Too complex for any human mind
Ur aura blazing

Know thee true
That i love You
©2009-2010 ~Djinni266
:icondjinni266:

Author's Comments

My first first post ^_^. I'v been afraid to do this for time. oh well XD.

Don't know if this is right section for this or if its even poetry xD. Just a jumble of emotions from when i fell in love. dubious eh?. Ironic because I'm still in love with that person, my first, but we are no longer a couple. old piece so criticism expected, lol. Just point the way and ill try to improve.

oh yh "Entity Unknown" was my original title changed it to Chains cause i thought it better, more appropriate

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